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Record W3136270790 · doi:10.1353/tfr.2013.0087

Remparts fissurés by Najib Redouane

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Aaron Prevots

Bibliographic record

Venue˜The œFrench review · 2013
Typearticle
Languageen
FieldArts and Humanities
TopicCaribbean and African Literature and Culture
Canadian institutionsnot available
Fundersnot available
KeywordsPoetryHumanitiesArtLamentHistoryLiteraturePhilosophy

Abstract

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Redouane, Najib. Remparts fissurés. Montréal: Marais, 2012. ISBN 978-2-92372131 -6. Pp. 89. $18 Can. Should returning to one’s birthplace bring happiness? Does self-imposed exile mean life in interstitial zones? Can writing heal wounds? Redouane, a writer of Moroccan origin living in the United States, depicts in this poetic lament a week spent in Marrakech in June 2009 looking for answers to such questions, knowing that, like fellow“enfants de la tribu égarée”(9), he could well accumulate disappointments. The distinguishing characteristics of Remparts are its narrativity, directness, rhythmic urgency, and thematic clarity. It notes changes to sites from Redouane’s childhood, tracks shifts in his mood, recounts interpersonal encounters that prove unsettling, suggests how intensely “lieux de mémoire” (43, 48, 75) resonate for him, and dramatizes why rest along“[l]e chemin de l’exil”remains“encore lointain”for this“guerrier” (89).Walks through the city predominate, punctuated by succinct, affectionate, knowledgeable descriptions on the one hand and the shock of the new on the other: “éclats de pauvreté et de résignation” (19); hordes of “visiteurs curieux” (27); “de grandes constructions / dominantes et envahissantes” (41); an uncertain spiritual compass “dans l’ère d’une mondialisation dévorante”(50); greedy“arrogance”(55); and a once fraternal “ville millénaire” (67) stripped of its “fierté” and “valeurs séculaires” (82). Punctuated by Arabic, bordering on prose in its syntactic and semantic flow, the free verse tracks the dichotomy between “nostalgies persistantes” (34) and the reality of the present day, aiming to convey via a “parole simple et pleine” (58) both the gentleness and the traumas of remembrance. One intriguing role model is that of a poet with ties to Marrakech who sang “avec le cœur” to preserve the city’s “honneur”: “Ô Chaâir Al Hamra [...] admirable faiseur de paroles célèbres / au ton moqueur et brutal ” (61). Indeed, the latter half of Remparts boasts emotional intensity in its forthright denunciation of the city’s ostensible downward slide and portrayal of Redouane’s desire to cradle his “souvenances” (32) within “gestes libérateurs” (81). The volume’s qualities include the honesty of the inner journey and the interweaving of literal and symbolic “errance” (28, 47, 86) regarding this “intime pèlerinage” (35) to Marrakech as well as the author’s preceding“décennie noire”(80). Some readers may object to the repetition of clichés and formulaic phrases in places or the insistent pessimism about “les frivolités marquantes / des temps modernes” (86). Nonetheless, Remparts offers, with its own particular élan, an authentic glimpse at a trip home in search of affective ties and cultural roots that finds the author ultimately unsettled,“[b]allotté entre exil et déracinement” (82). Southwestern University (TX) Aaron Prevots 280 FRENCH REVIEW 87.1 ...

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Teacher imitation

Not calibrated prevalence, not ground truth. Human validation pending. Learned from the 10,348 direct Codex labels and 10,348 direct Gemma labels. Candidate is the union of thresholded teacher heads; consensus is their intersection. These outputs are machine_predicted_unvalidated and are not human labels or direct frontier model labels.

metaresearch head score (Codex)0.000
metaresearch head score (Gemma)0.000
Version: codex-gemma-dda1882f352aValidation status: machine_predicted_unvalidated
Candidate categoriesInsufficient payload (model declined to judge)
Consensus categoriesInsufficient payload (model declined to judge)
DomainCandidate signal: none · Consensus signal: none
Study designCandidate signal: Not applicable · Consensus signal: Not applicable
GenreCandidate signal: Other · Consensus signal: Other
Teacher disagreement score0.404
Threshold uncertainty score0.999

Codex and Gemma teacher scores by category

CategoryCodexGemma
Metaresearch0.0000.000
Meta-epidemiology (narrow)0.0000.000
Meta-epidemiology (broad)0.0000.000
Bibliometrics0.0000.000
Science and technology studies0.0000.000
Scholarly communication0.0000.000
Open science0.0000.000
Research integrity0.0000.000
Insufficient payload (model declined to judge)0.0120.002

Machine scores (provisional)

The two teacher heads of the student model, read on this work. A score orders the frame for review; it never asserts a category, and the validation status ships verbatim with every row.

Baseline scores from an immature model (maturity gate not passed, 7 training rounds). Scores rank; they never assert a category.

Opus teacher head0.018
GPT teacher head0.215
Teacher spread0.197 · how far apart the two teachers sit on this one work
Validation statusscore_only:v0-immature-baseline · verbatim from the scoring run: score_only means the number may rank works, and no category label ships from it

Classification

machine, unvalidated

Machine predicted; both teacher heads agree on what is shown here.

Study designNot applicable
Domainnot available
GenreOther

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